Above-The-Fold Website Fix Audit

You’re losing leads in the first 3 seconds.

I’ll show you exactly where, and hand you the copy that fixes it.

No theory. No generic “best practices.” I take your current hero section (what visitors see before scrolling), audit it against real buyer behavior, and rewrite the five things that actually drive action:

- Headline  

- Sub-headline  

- 3 trust bullets  

- Primary CTA button  

You get a single-page PDF with:

- Your current friction points (with specific line-by-line notes)  

- A local competitor benchmark—what they say above the fold that you don’t  

- New copy, ready to paste—no design skills required  

- A 72-hour implementation plan (your web person finishes in 15 minutes)  

- One round of revisions, included  

- Delivery to your inbox by the date I commit to  

This is for you if:

- You have a live site and existing traffic (not a startup with zero visitors)  

- You want more calls and inquiries from that traffic—not a redesign, SEO retainer, or rebrand  

- You want finished copy assets, not a sales pitch disguised as a consultation  

This is not for you if:

- You're building a brand from scratch  

- You're looking for strategy without execution  

- You need a 60-minute call to “align” before we start